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Offline dark tyrant

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« on: March 27, 2008, 03:34:15 pm »
Name: Cyborga (Before becoming a Cyborg: Cero Shados)

Species: Human/Cyborg

Home World: Vendaxa

History: Cyborga was born 30 years before the massive Clone Wars. He grew up in a outpost on the overgrown planet of Vendaxa. His parents were successful Safari Guides, they led a good life. Cyborga (then called Cero) became very interested in Vendaxan wildlife. However by the time he turned 15 he became very interested in Galactic Politics and Military Organization. He studied diligently at the only school the outpost had and read every holobook on Politics and Military Organization he could find. However by the time he turned 18 he had gone as far as he could go in the Outposts schools. He bade good bye to his parents and went to study at a Academy on Anaxes. By the time Cyborga had turned 25 he had graduated from the Academy with flying colors.

He then returned to Vendaxa, only to find it groaning under the heel of tyrannous former Jedi. Cyborga knew he had to free his home world. However he did not have the credits to do so. By pure luck however, Cyborga found an abandoned Trade Federation Factory. He marked the Factories position on his map and returned to the Outpost to learn how to activate the Factory. He soon returned to the Factory armed with the knowledge of how to activate it. He activated the factory and ordered it to create an army of Droids to free his world. The Factory did as it was told and began to pump out numerous B1 Battle Droids and E4 Baron Droids. As soon as the army was finished, Cyborga marched it directly to the Citadel of the deranged former Jedi. In a great battle Cyborga’s Droid Army fought the forces of the former Jedi. Cyborga’s Army won that battle. Cyborga himself confronted the former Jedi and slew him in hand to hand combat. Cyborga then claimed the Former Jedi’s Saber as his own.

With his home world free Cyborga settled down on a Manor overlooking Vendaxa’s largest lake. But the Trade Federation had taken note of Cyborga’s activities and approached him with an offer to be the Commander of their Droid Armies. He accepted gladly, he seen saw action during the Battle Of Naboo. He worked hand and hand with the B1 Commander Droid OOM-9. However he barely escaped the Battle of the Grassy Plains with his life. Cyborga went on the command some CIS Forces during the Clone Wars. However at the end of the Clone War’s Cyborga settled down on Vendaxa. But his peace was not to last.

The Empire was pursing some bandits to Vendaxa and the shoot out took place over the house of his Parents. One of the bandits fighters intentionally destroyed the house. Cyborga, stricken with grief and rage reactivated his old Droid Army and tracked the bandits to their HQ on the planet...and mercilessly killed them all with minimal help from his army. However the Empire took notice of his Droid Army and deemed it a threat. Darth Vader himself along with 501st Legion were dispatched to destroy Cyborga and his Army. In epic battle which took place around Cyborga’s Manor the Empire defeated his Droid Army. Cyborga confronted Darth Vader during that battle. Cyborga lost horribly but somehow managed to crawl away from the battle. The CIS remnant desperate for good commanders, found him hiding out in a cave barely alive. They restored his body using the same technics used on General Grievous. Cyborga then joined the CIS Remnant and remains its leader today.

I just want your veiws on this history...
« Last Edit: March 27, 2008, 03:35:36 pm by dark tyrant »
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« Reply #1 on: March 27, 2008, 03:45:13 pm »
seems like some goo work you did there.
Enemies you threaten make armies.
Enemies you destroy make graves.
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« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2008, 03:48:49 pm »
THATS NOT A MOOB







ITS A SPACE STATION


LOL I'm kidding I'm not coming back to CN. >_>
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« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2008, 03:50:58 pm »
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THATS NOT A MOOB


ITS A SPACE STATION

Was that really needed?I would like serious reveiws.
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« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2008, 05:45:35 pm »
Sounds good, but I'm not a big fan of the name Cyborga. Sounds like something off of Thundercats >_>


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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2008, 06:12:34 pm »
seems good enough that it could go with Star Wars
nice job
Ruling over pie since that one time a couple years ago.

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